In Me

[poroeta]

IN ME

Soul at peace,
heart so bright,
stars alight,
hope so true.

Sky and breeze,
taste of peace,
a hundred trips
to soul beneath.

Shades of light,
dark invites
pure delight,
heart's alight.

Hint of bliss,
wind so sweet,
birds in flight,
stars so bright.

Kiss in breath,
lips in wait,
love is due,
hope so true.

In me ...you.

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[poroeta]

Thanks wolfgang, is exactly what i wanted to convey, peace and love "she" brings in my life, thank you.

 

[DEJAVU]

Good job my friend. Solid; brief and packed up
with feeling. Very nice write, thanks for sharing.


DEJAVU

 

[Hoplita]

IN ME

Sky and breeze,
taste of peace,
a hundred trips
to soul beneath.

Shades of light,
dark invites
pure delight,
heart so bright.

Hint of bliss,
wind so sweet,
birds in flight,
stars alight.

Kiss in breath,
lips in wait,
love is due,
hope so true.

In me
soul at peace,
heart so bright,
stars alight,
hope so true.

In me… you.

Me gusto la rima que tiene , pues es muy compacto al usar pocas silabas y estar lleno de adjetivos que contrastan las ideas entre si. Muy bueno poroeta, mas para mi que soy acérrimo defensor de la buena rima.

 

[poroeta]

thanks to both of you, i appreciate you stopping by. This poem, like so many i have written... describes the ...mmm... "spectrum" of feelings that i receive from having thoughts of my beloved wife, thanks again.

 

[Estella Farfalla]

IN ME

Soul at peace,
heart so bright,
stars alight,
hope so true.

Sky and breeze,
taste of peace,
a hundred trips
to soul beneath.

Shades of light,
dark invites
pure delight,
heart so bright.

Hint of bliss,
wind so sweet,
birds in flight,
stars alight.

Kiss in breath,
lips in wait,
love is due,
hope so true.

In me… you.

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Porepoet ::::! Well... you know I love how you write! God, this is sooo sweet! It's true, it provides a peaceful feeling... maybe it's the wonderful rhythm it has. It's a pleasure to read your work, in english or in spanish!

Hugs,
Dani

 

[poroeta]

Me la voy a creer !! (jiji) Merci beaucoup.

 

[Pablo Alejandro]

Como te dije no se ni papa del ingles...pero si se usar la internet y busque un traductor...jeje...muy buen poema amigo...gusto leerte...saludos...
Pablo Alejandro...

 

[poroeta]

Gracias Pablo, suspiros al viento, es ese escrito, gracias amigo.