In Me

poroeta · 2 de Agosto de 2006

IN ME

Soul at peace,
heart so bright,
stars alight,
hope so true.

Sky and breeze,
taste of peace,
a hundred trips
to soul beneath.

Shades of light,
dark invites
pure delight,
heart's alight.

Hint of bliss,
wind so sweet,
birds in flight,
stars so bright.

Kiss in breath,
lips in wait,
love is due,
hope so true.

In me ...you.

poroeta · 4 de Agosto de 2006

Thanks wolfgang, is exactly what i wanted to convey, peace and love "she" brings in my life, thank you.

DEJAVU · 8 de Agosto de 2006

Good job my friend. Solid; brief and packed up
with feeling. Very nice write, thanks for sharing.

DEJAVU

Hoplita · 8 de Agosto de 2006

poroeta dijo:
IN ME

Sky and breeze,
taste of peace,
a hundred trips
to soul beneath.

Shades of light,
dark invites
pure delight,
heart so bright.

Hint of bliss,
wind so sweet,
birds in flight,
stars alight.

Kiss in breath,
lips in wait,
love is due,
hope so true.

In me
soul at peace,
heart so bright,
stars alight,
hope so true.

In me… you.

Me gusto la rima que tiene , pues es muy compacto al usar pocas silabas y estar lleno de adjetivos que contrastan las ideas entre si. Muy bueno poroeta, mas para mi que soy acérrimo defensor de la buena rima.

poroeta · 8 de Agosto de 2006

thanks to both of you, i appreciate you stopping by. This poem, like so many i have written... describes the ...mmm... "spectrum" of feelings that i receive from having thoughts of my beloved wife, thanks again.

Estella Farfalla · 17 de Enero de 2007

poroeta dijo:
IN ME

Soul at peace,
heart so bright,
stars alight,
hope so true.

Sky and breeze,
taste of peace,
a hundred trips
to soul beneath.

Shades of light,
dark invites
pure delight,
heart so bright.

Hint of bliss,
wind so sweet,
birds in flight,
stars alight.

Kiss in breath,
lips in wait,
love is due,
hope so true.

In me you.

Porepoet :: :sonreir1:

::! Well... you know I love how you write! God, this is sooo sweet! It's true, it provides a peaceful feeling... maybe it's the wonderful rhythm it has. It's a pleasure to read your work, in english or in spanish!

Hugs,
Dani

poroeta · 18 de Enero de 2007

Me la voy a creer !! (jiji) Merci beaucoup.

Pablo Alejandro · 18 de Enero de 2007

Como te dije no se ni papa del ingles...pero si se usar la internet y busque un traductor...jeje...muy buen poema amigo...gusto leerte...saludos...
Pablo Alejandro...

poroeta · 20 de Enero de 2007

Gracias Pablo, suspiros al viento, es ese escrito, gracias amigo.

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