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Discussion in 'Poemas Melancólicos (Tristes)' started by spring, Oct 6, 2015. Replies: 24 | Views: 541

  1. spring

    spring Sonriendo...

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    Son tus motivos
    la lagrima de sangre
    embrión mi ser
     
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    spring, Oct 6, 2015
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  2. Francisco Lechuga Mejia

    Francisco Lechuga Mejia Poeta que no puede vivir sin el portal

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    me ha gustado su haiku


    saludos
     
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  3. malco

    malco Moderador foro Tensones.Miembro del Jurado Staff Member Moderadores Miembro del JURADO DE LA MUSA Equipo Revista "Eco y latido"

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    Ser o no ser
    para sin olvidarte
    es ser y estar    ​
     
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  4. Jorge Lemoine y Bosshardt

    Jorge Lemoine y Bosshardt MAESTRO

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    Arte sobresaliente en la calidad sublime, magistral la inspiración hermosa.
     
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    Jorge Lemoine y Bosshardt, Oct 6, 2015
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  5. RAMIPOETA

    RAMIPOETA – RAMIRO PONCE ”POETA RAPSODA"

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    ¡¡¡MARAVILLOSO!!!
     
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  6. spring

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    [​IMG] Francisco, gracias por tu comentario.
     
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    [​IMG] Chevere Malco, un comentario en haiku ¡¡¡GENIAL!!!
     
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    [​IMG] Gracias Lemoine, agradable siempre es tu comentario.
     
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    [​IMG] Agradecida Ramipoeta, tu presencia y comentario es valiosa para mi.
     
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    spring, Oct 6, 2015
  10. Paloma PerezP.

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    Muy hermoso senryu Spring. Te felicito por la calidad de tu poema y te envío un abrazo.
     
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    Paloma PerezP., Oct 7, 2015
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    spring Sonriendo...

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    [​IMG] Agradecida y honrada de su comentario Paloma.
     
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    spring, Oct 7, 2015
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    Maldonado Poeta veterano en el Portal

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    Ya has hecho todo un arte las brevedades orientales mi amiga y te salen muy bellas. Un abrazo Poeta
     
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    [​IMG] Maldonado y como me alegra y regocija tu comentario, este arte me parece la cuna de la poesía.
    De hecho con cada uno de ellos puedes hacer varios poemas tomándolo como materia prima jajajajaja ya lo intente es ¡¡¡¡¡¡¡cheverisimo!!!!!!!
     
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  14. Jorge Lemoine y Bosshardt

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    Hermosura preciosa de emocionantes letras sobresalientes.
     
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    Jorge Lemoine y Bosshardt, Oct 7, 2015
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    spring Sonriendo...

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    [​IMG] Alegre de verle de nuevo Lemoine.
     
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    spring, Oct 8, 2015
  16. Jorge Lemoine y Bosshardt

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    Espléndida creación de letras magistrales.
     
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    Jorge Lemoine y Bosshardt, Oct 8, 2015
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    [​IMG] Gracias Lemoine.
     
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    spring, Oct 10, 2015
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    joblam Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    El difícil arte de expresar en tres versos un mundo abierto de posibilidades. Un placer dejar mis cordiales saludos.
     
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    joblam, Oct 10, 2015
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    laura solar salas Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    Hermosas letras.
    Un placer leerte
     
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    Paco Valiente Poeta que no puede vivir sin el portal

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    Ingenio magnifico al servicio de un poema bello y certero en su idea. Muy bonito amiga primavera. Un abrazo. Paco.
     
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    [​IMG] Joblan es un maravilloso arte muy bien interpretado por ti.
    El placer es para mi recibir tu visita. Un abrazo.
     
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    spring, Oct 12, 2015
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    [​IMG] Gracias Laura por detenerte en mis letras.
     
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    [​IMG] Paco, siempre agradecida de tus estupendos comentarios. Cariños..
     
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  24. Luis Prieto

    Luis Prieto Moderador Global Staff Member Moderador Global

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    Un senryu realmente conmovedor amiga mía.
    Pura belleza.
    Mis felicitaciones sinceras.
     
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    Luis Prieto, Oct 13, 2015
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    [​IMG] Me alegra mucho tu opinión sabes es valiosa para mi. Cariños
     
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