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Discussion in 'La Torre de Babel' started by selenschek manfred, Jan 13, 2014. Replies: 19 | Views: 1855

  1. selenschek manfred

    selenschek manfred Hijo de la Luna

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    the spine of your absense hurts my fingers
    see blood shed by my hands
    and i still hold the rose that i bring
    not tell your name that is unforgettable
    break tears folling on the floor
    and i still hold the rose that i bring
     
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    selenschek manfred, Jan 13, 2014
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  2. dragon_ecu

    dragon_ecu Esporádico permanente

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    Me perdonan el atrevimeinto de intentar traducir estas letras...

    La espina de tu ausencia hiere mis dedos
    veo la sangre que brota de mis manos
    y sostengo firme la rosa que traigo.
    No digas tu nombre que es inolvidable
    lágrimas rotas van cayendo hacia el suelo
    y yo tengo firme la rosa que traigo.
     
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    dragon_ecu, Jan 13, 2014
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  3. Lourdes C

    Lourdes C POETISA DEL AMOR

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    Es muy hermoso lo que has escrito y te felicito
    por ello. Hay un gran sentir en cada linea.
    Un placer poder pasar a leerte.
    Saludos y Bendiciones.
     
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    Lourdes C, Jan 13, 2014
  4. Lourdes C

    Lourdes C POETISA DEL AMOR

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    Yo creo que tu traduccion es buenisima
    y me ha encantado leer la version orginal
    en ingles y esta version que has escrito
    en nuestro idioma. Te felicito. Grato leerte.
    Estoy segura que al autor del poema
    le gustara tu traduccion.
     
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    Lourdes C, Jan 13, 2014
  5. selenschek manfred

    selenschek manfred Hijo de la Luna

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    DRAGON, poeta hermano gracias por tu visita aprecio la traducción es tal cual, un fuerte abraso !!
     
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    selenschek manfred, Jan 13, 2014
  6. selenschek manfred

    selenschek manfred Hijo de la Luna

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    LOURDES,hermosa poetisa es bonito tu comentario muy agradecido ! beso !
     
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    selenschek manfred, Jan 13, 2014
  7. Mary C. López

    Mary C. López Una mujer de líneas y procesos.

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    All verses hurts, each image produced an emotional and sad landscape.
    This is a great poem without a doubt. Thanks to share with us
    Congratulations poet.
     
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    Mary C. López, Jan 13, 2014
  8. selenschek manfred

    selenschek manfred Hijo de la Luna

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    thanks dear MARY EVER IS A PLEASURE YOUR PRESENCE IN MY HOUSE YOU KNOW THAT ! MUAK!S !
     
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    selenschek manfred, Jan 13, 2014
  9. Mark Silver

    Mark Silver Invitado

    Beautiful lines manfred is a joy read it.
     
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    Mark Silver, Mar 12, 2014
  10. selenschek manfred

    selenschek manfred Hijo de la Luna

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    Thanks for your coments estimated poet MARK SILVER, is a pleasure to met you !
     
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  11. princesa de fuego

    princesa de fuego Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    yo tambien te extraño:::lengua1:::
     
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  12. selenschek manfred

    selenschek manfred Hijo de la Luna

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    Que linda mi princs, gracias mi bonita por visitarme en la torre !muaks!
     
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  13. spring

    spring Sonriendo...

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    [​IMG] It´s a wonderful poem that expresses a love that still bleeding from the wound.
    I like it so much my new friend.
     
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  14. selenschek manfred

    selenschek manfred Hijo de la Luna

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    Thanks pretty spring, You aré lovely, i'm very happy 4 ur coments, kisses.
     
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    lluviadeabril lluvia & rain

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    Images that break the heart and silence, the word that rhymes perfectly with...

    Beautiful lines selencschek. A pleasure to read.
    -hugs
     
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    lluviadeabril, Sep 28, 2015
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  16. danie

    danie solo un pensamiento...

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    Bello y romántico poema tanto en inglés como en el castellano. ;)

    Thank you very much for writing beautiful.

    A pleasure to read.

    A poet hug.
     
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    danie, Sep 28, 2015
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  17. selenschek manfred

    selenschek manfred Hijo de la Luna

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    Thanks Aprilrain, You welcome, is a pleasure to met You,
     
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    selenschek manfred, Sep 28, 2015
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    selenschek manfred Hijo de la Luna

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    Thanks for your great review Danie, and I sent a sincere frienship greeting.
     
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  19. Siempre Geralda

    Siempre Geralda Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    Hey Manfred, you have written a poem from the heart! It has been a pleasure to stop by. Congrats and many blessings!
     
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    Siempre Geralda, Jan 11, 2016
  20. Likiniano 2

    Likiniano 2 Exp..

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    "Everybody's got a hungry heart" say " The Boss"...

    And you and I also my brother.

    Big hugs.

    Jon
     
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