Your absense

[selenschek manfred]

the spine of your absense hurts my fingers
see blood shed by my hands
and i still hold the rose that i bring
not tell your name that is unforgettable
break tears folling on the floor
and i still hold the rose that i bring

 

[dragon_ecu]

Me perdonan el atrevimeinto de intentar traducir estas letras...

La espina de tu ausencia hiere mis dedos
veo la sangre que brota de mis manos
y sostengo firme la rosa que traigo.
No digas tu nombre que es inolvidable
lágrimas rotas van cayendo hacia el suelo
y yo tengo firme la rosa que traigo.

 

[Lourdes C]

the spine of your absense hurts my fingers
see blood shed by my hands
and still hold the rose that i bring
not tell your name that is unforgettable
break tears folling on the floor
and i still hold the rose that i bring

Es muy hermoso lo que has escrito y te felicito
por ello. Hay un gran sentir en cada linea.
Un placer poder pasar a leerte.
Saludos y Bendiciones.

 

[Lourdes C]

Me perdonan el atrevimeinto de intentar traducir estas letras...

La espina de tu ausencia hiere mis dedos
veo la sangre que brota de mis manos
y sostengo firme la rosa que traigo.
No digas tu nombre que es inolvidable
lágrimas rotas van cayendo hacia el suelo
y yo tengo firme la rosa que traigo.

Yo creo que tu traduccion es buenisima
y me ha encantado leer la version orginal
en ingles y esta version que has escrito
en nuestro idioma. Te felicito. Grato leerte.
Estoy segura que al autor del poema
le gustara tu traduccion.

 

[selenschek manfred]

DRAGON, poeta hermano gracias por tu visita aprecio la traducción es tal cual, un fuerte abraso !!

 

[selenschek manfred]

LOURDES,hermosa poetisa es bonito tu comentario muy agradecido ! beso !

 

[Mary C. López]

All verses hurts, each image produced an emotional and sad landscape.
This is a great poem without a doubt. Thanks to share with us
Congratulations poet.

 

[selenschek manfred]

thanks dear MARY EVER IS A PLEASURE YOUR PRESENCE IN MY HOUSE YOU KNOW THAT ! MUAK!S !

 

[Mark Silver]

Beautiful lines manfred is a joy read it.

 

[selenschek manfred]

Thanks for your coments estimated poet MARK SILVER, is a pleasure to met you !

 

[princesa de fuego]

yo tambien te extraño::::

 

[selenschek manfred]

Que linda mi princs, gracias mi bonita por visitarme en la torre !muaks!

 

[spring]

the spine of your absense hurts my fingers
see blood shed by my hands
and i still hold the rose that i bring
not tell your name that is unforgettable
break tears folling on the floor
and i still hold the rose that i bring

It´s a wonderful poem that expresses a love that still bleeding from the wound.
I like it so much my new friend.

 

[selenschek manfred]

It´s a wonderful poem that expresses a love that still bleeding from the wound.
I like it so much my new friend.

Thanks pretty spring, You aré lovely, i'm very happy 4 ur coments, kisses.

 

[lluviadeabril]

the spine of your absense hurts my fingers
see blood shed by my hands
and i still hold the rose that i bring
not tell your name that is unforgettable
break tears folling on the floor
and i still hold the rose that i bring

Images that break the heart and silence, the word that rhymes perfectly with...

Beautiful lines selencschek. A pleasure to read.
-hugs

 

[danie]

the spine of your absense hurts my fingers
see blood shed by my hands
and i still hold the rose that i bring
not tell your name that is unforgettable
break tears folling on the floor
and i still hold the rose that i bring

Bello y romántico poema tanto en inglés como en el castellano.

Thank you very much for writing beautiful.

A pleasure to read.

A poet hug.

 

[selenschek manfred]

Images that break the heart and silence, the word that rhymes perfectly with...

Beautiful lines selencschek. A pleasure to read.
-hugs

Thanks Aprilrain, You welcome, is a pleasure to met You,

 

[selenschek manfred]

Bello y romántico poema tanto en inglés como en el castellano.

Thank you very much for writing beautiful.

A pleasure to read.

A poet hug.

Thanks for your great review Danie, and I sent a sincere frienship greeting.

 

[Siempre Geralda]

the spine of your absense hurts my fingers
see blood shed by my hands
and i still hold the rose that i bring
not tell your name that is unforgettable
break tears folling on the floor
and i still hold the rose that i bring

Hey Manfred, you have written a poem from the heart! It has been a pleasure to stop by. Congrats and many blessings!

 

[Likiniano 2]

"Everybody's got a hungry heart" say " The Boss"...

And you and I also my brother.

Big hugs.

Jon